Wednesday 15 May 2019

Why bikes should be band?

Why bikes should be a band?

Hi everyone so today I’m going to tell you why bikes should not
ride in school.
1. Bikes should be banned because you might crash into each
other and, you will get injured badly. Also if it is rocky and it will
be very bumpy.


2. Secondly, I think bikes should not have bikes at school
because children might not have space for there bikes. Also if
your class didn’t have shade and it was a raining day your
bike can also get wet.


3. Bikes are powered fast and you can bump into something
and break bones. Also if children don’t got a helmet and ride it
without a helmet and bang their heads.


Overall I think bikes should  be band badly because of children
will might get  injured and won’t come to school until they are
much better.

I like how you used some ideas. Next time use punctuation.
BMB: Zoey.

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