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Perceptive writing

“I wish that furry feline would get its backside off my face!” the sofa moaned to the coffee table. “I know, he sometimes sits on me when the humans aren’t watching… Oooh, I wish he’d go and play with a ball of string.

Suddenly splash! someone spill jelly all over me.  “ it’s not”  It’s not my problem the brother replied. When everyone is watching TV come and sit on me and I can’t see anything.

Mum comes in and sat on me too and spill hot water on me! So mum went to the kitchen table and got a wet cloth and wipe all over me. I was like on fire but when she put cold freezing water that I turned into ice.

When I clean up suddenly slam!  went the door. “ Dad is back from work” shouted the children “Oh on!” I said to myself. Dad is back suddenly dad sleeps on me and started to snore really loud that I had to cover my ears.

I Aisha have read your story I loved your topic that you wrote about and it was funny when dad started snoring maybe. Next time you could add more detail.

Number pieces

Number piece

Synonyms and Alternatives -Shake

Scooters Should be Band!

Why scooters should be banned from school
because you might get injured and hurt. Also
if you don’t have brakes you can’t stop and
might crash into something hard.

Firstly we should be banned badly in school
it’s because little children will get a broken
bone and they might go on the rocky part and
trip up. The teacher that is on duty that are
holding coffee and get accident to fall down and
the teacher will be angry.

The teacher will think a scooter is a mess in the
classroom and won’t have space. Also, it will
scrap the concrete and damage the floor. They
might go on the grass and it was wet there
might slip on the grass and get hurt like on
their head.

Overall I think scooters should be banned strongly because you also get hurt and won’t come to school into they are better.

Good reasons also explain more so little kids
know what you mean. By Garuth

Tuatua

Why bikes should be band?

Why bikes should be a band?

Hi everyone so today I’m going to tell you why bikes should not
ride in school.

1. Bikes should be banned because you might crash into each
other and, you will get injured badly. Also if it is rocky and it will
be very bumpy.

2. Secondly, I think bikes should not have bikes at school
because children might not have space for there bikes. Also if
your class didn’t have shade and it was a raining day your
bike can also get wet.

3. Bikes are powered fast and you can bump into something
and break bones. Also if children don’t got a helmet and ride it
without a helmet and bang their heads.

Overall I think bikes should  be band badly because of children
will might get  injured and won’t come to school until they are
much better.

I like how you used some ideas. Next time use punctuation.
BMB: Zoey.

Operation Flax

Jump Jam

This morning was a bit different because the
whole school had Jump Jam. My favourite song
was the Coconut one because the teachers
danced on stage.

We did it outside our class. Brett danced and
we had followed him because we didn’t know how
the moves to the song. He got the song from his
phone and connected so it is much louder.

Then we stopped because we finished and Brett
was talking in the  microphone and, everyone
was as silent as a pin drop on the floor.
Finally, it was the end and I asked Zoey “is
it the  end”
Aleena- I love that you added some more details and tried the best next time work on your spellings.                                                                                                                                                                                   

Operation Flax

Fetch

Assembly

This week will be Rm7’s assembly. I’m feeling so excited that
I can’t wait to the assembly.

Rm7 students will be able to say something each. Before that
we did the National Anthem. After it was the castle and I said
“last term Rm7 learnt about british castles.”

Once everyone was done we sang a song. The song was Try
everything. After Mrs Davies crook and Mrs Knows had the
principal's Award ( I’m wondering who would get it.)Mrs Davies
crook gave out Emer Bear out.
I like how you used punctuation. Next time make sure your
sentences make sense

Number Price

Scooters should not be able to ride in school

In my opinion I strongly  believe that scooters should be banned from being used within school grounds.

The first reason that scooters should be banned is because tiny children might be injured and also children might crash into each other. This will cause lots of injuries within the school and the sickbay would be exceptionally busy.

Also, another reason is, when you are going very fast if there is a car that is going back the driver can not see you. This would cause a crash and be dangerous.

So I really believe that scooters shouldn’t be allowed in school.

I Sanah have read your writing band I love your vocabulary like exceptionally.

School itis

School itis