Wednesday 31 July 2019

What if poem

What if… what if… what if…                   
What if rained all year long.
What if the bird decided not to fly.
Is that true or is that a lie? What if Ziggy
flew up to heaven.                            
What if Zara transformed into Zayn.
What if Mr Mc transformed into a big Mac.
What if Samantha had a pet black panther.
What if Mr Mc lived in a sack that has a crack.          
What if Mr Mc stops talking for a Second.
That would be awesome don’t you reckon.

What if poop came out like a goop.

I Aisha have read your poem I love your funny
ideas.
         



Tuesday 30 July 2019

Why stars shimmer?


Have you ever looked up at the dark, black clear night sky? Have you seen the thousands of shimmer stars?

When you look up, you can see that they twinkle however it is just your eyes but they are playing a trick on you.
If you can’t see it shine that means it’s a planet. There is a thick blanket of air around the earth. It travels through turbulent winds then the calm relaxing winds. 
I Zoey have read your writing I like how you had lots of ideas but there are lots of places that don't make any sense.