Have you ever looked up at the dark, black clear night sky? Have you seen the thousands of shimmer stars?
When you look up, you can see that they twinkle however it is just your eyes but they are playing a trick on you.
If you can’t see it shine that means it’s a planet. There is a thick blanket of air around the earth. It travels through turbulent winds then the calm relaxing winds.
I Zoey have read your writing I like how you had lots of ideas but there are lots of places that don't make any sense.
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