Why cell phones should be banned?
Firstly in my opinion that cell phones should be band from holding it because
you might get crash or get seriously injured and kill people. Then human’s
crossing the road you will bump into them.
you might get crash or get seriously injured and kill people. Then human’s
crossing the road you will bump into them.
Secondly, the traffic light turns green and they won't know when to go. Also
when you are going past the red traffic lights you will crash and get hurt.
when you are going past the red traffic lights you will crash and get hurt.
When you drive a car you can not drive with one hand. Also when a car appears
out of the streets or driveway.
out of the streets or driveway.
Between 2003 and 2008, there were 482 injury crashes and 25 fatal crashes
attributed to the use of mobile phones.
attributed to the use of mobile phones.
Buddy comment by Zara - I love the way how you have used the word
‘attributed’ in your writing and, next time you should probably work on making
it makes sense but either than that, it’s amazing to keep up the good work.
‘attributed’ in your writing and, next time you should probably work on making
it makes sense but either than that, it’s amazing to keep up the good work.
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