Have you heard about Climate change? Well at the moment
our planet has the perfect temperature to keep all living things
alive and happy.
our planet has the perfect temperature to keep all living things
alive and happy.
There are three natural factors which affect Climate change.
The factors are as follows; volcanic eruptions, changes in the
world’s orbit and the Sun’s energy.
The factors are as follows; volcanic eruptions, changes in the
world’s orbit and the Sun’s energy.
Humans also cause climate change too. We started to build
more buildings in the 1700s which is 300 years ago. We started
to burned coal to make electricity. We made those things which
all contributed to polluting our beautiful Earth.
more buildings in the 1700s which is 300 years ago. We started
to burned coal to make electricity. We made those things which
all contributed to polluting our beautiful Earth.
Also us humans started to cut lots of trees and forests down. If
we continue to we will have no oxygen left to breathe.
we continue to we will have no oxygen left to breathe.
We reread you're writing together and fixed up a few sentences
in order for them to be clearer for the reader. Great into by the
way. Mr Mc
in order for them to be clearer for the reader. Great into by the
way. Mr Mc
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