About my Holiday
On Friday at 7:00 pm my mum said “Let go to
the play” so we hoped in the car and when we
got there I got out of the car,we made our way
to the theater. Once me and my mum found our
seats we sat down.
the play” so we hoped in the car and when we
got there I got out of the car,we made our way
to the theater. Once me and my mum found our
seats we sat down.
When we were setted the show started. The
show was really funny I thought so did my
mum. Once it was break time my mum took
some photo of me. When it was the end it was
really funny because they put cream on each
other.
show was really funny I thought so did my
mum. Once it was break time my mum took
some photo of me. When it was the end it was
really funny because they put cream on each
other.
I like how you used speech marks and you
used lots of ideas to describe. Next time you
need to have it to make sense. BMB Zoey
used lots of ideas to describe. Next time you
need to have it to make sense. BMB Zoey
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