Division Lesson using the Number Pieces App

Division lesson using Number Pieces

About my Holiday

About my Holiday

On Friday at 7:00 pm my mum said “Let go to
the play” so we hoped in the car and when we
got there I got out of the car,we made our way
to the theater. Once me and my mum found our
seats we sat down.

When we were setted the show started. The
show was really funny I thought so did my
mum. Once it was break time my mum took
some photo of me. When it was the end it was
really funny because they put cream on each
other.

I like how you used speech marks and you
used lots of ideas to describe. Next time you
need to have it to make sense. BMB Zoey

 

fact about the moat

1.The moat is we’re water around it so enemies
can’t get in.

2.The water is not shallow because if enemies
can’t find the entries so they drawn.

3.In some places moats evolved into more extensive water
defences, including natural or artificial lakes, dams and sluices.

4.Inside the castle it is dry and it is not wet.

5.The purpose of a moat was primarily to protect the castle
from attack. As a defence mechanism, moats were very effective.

I like the way that you described what a moat actually is  and
didn’t make it into a hard sentence. By Aleena.

ANZAC Day

Last Sunday

Last Sunday I went to Free Market.My mum asked
us if we want tomatoes? “Yes” I replied. After I
went home from my car. When I got home I ate some
food. Then I changed my togs under my top. I was
reading a book for a while.

When we got there we were too early so there was
a playground. I asked my mum “can go on the
playground?”“Yes” replied my mum. When my mum’s
friend came so we went in  the pool. The water
was cold at first but it got better. My brother
forgot his goggles so my mum bought a pair.
After my mum asked me if I want new goggles?
“Yes please” so my mum bought me goggles too.
After I ate biscuit. Then I dry. When we were
outside in the dark car park. We drove back home.

Samantha I like the way that you used speech
marks in your writing well done. Sincerely
Aleena.

Futsol

We’ve only just returned from Futsol. Our teacher
from last week, was ill so we had another teacher.
For our warm up we played stuck in the mud. After
we played  Futsol and our team won because we
scored four goals.

British Castles

British Castles

Castles- The castle’s queen, king  and royal people live in castles. A castles is a
very strong building. The castles were built 100 year ago. The castles was there
because there was battles. The castles was made out of very strong stone.

The Drawbridge-The is were people go in and out of the castles. There are
chains up so that enemies can’t go in.  The drawbridge is made out of wood,
also they let and the drawbridge is like a gate but it goes up and down.

The Moat- the moat is water around the castle. Some enemies have trouble to
cross the moat. The people from inside the castles is a safe place because
enemies can’t find the place to get in.

The Battlement-The battlement is were people shoot at and hide behind the
battlement, because it is also very  high because enemies can not see people
in the battlement. So people can stay safe.

Keep-  The keep is a strong building to. The queen and king goes to the keep
only if it is under attack.

Samantha…. Good job like that you have adjectives and describing word such as
strong. By Garuth.